A penny for your...story?

[Tiel424]

Corny title. Anyhow, I thought it would be a good idea if we had a fanfiction thread. Just to discuss the going ons in the server and in singleplayer. But be sure to add something new, for example:

Billy Bob and Zaneo walked on the ground looking for stuff.
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Billy Bob and Zaneo quested the grass covered dirt blocks, scouring for the <item(s)>.

I'm in no position to give english lessons, but in my opinion the 2nd sounded MUCH better. I want you to post your stories here of your various adventures on the novylen.net server. Don't put down anyone if it's a bad story, give some insight. Many people don't take BOTH types of criticism well, so at least try to disguise it like, "I think the story was good, but you should..."

So yeah. Please post your tales in a story format hear and you'll get critique. Have a good one!

[Zaneo]

In the beginning, Rob created the server. At first the earth was shapeless and covered in darkness, and Rob's spirit hovered over the waters. Rob said,"/time Day". And there was light. Rob divided the day from the night, naming them ' day' and 'night'. And there was evening, and there was morning—the first day.

And Rob said, "Let there be an expanse between the waters to separate water from water." So Rob made the expanse and separated the water under the expanse from the water above it. And it was so. Rob called the expanse "sky." And there was evening, and there was morning—the second day.

And Rob said, "Let the water under the sky be gathered to one place, and let dry ground appear." And it was so. Rob called the dry ground "land," and the gathered waters he called "seas." And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let the land produce vegetation: seed-bearing plants and trees on the land that bear fruit with seed in it, according to their various kinds." And it was so. The land produced vegetation: plants bearing seed according to their kinds and trees bearing fruit with seed in it according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the third day.

And Rob said, "Let there be lights in the expanse of the sky to separate the day from the night, and let them serve as signs to mark seasons and days and years, and let them be lights in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth." And it was so. Rob made two great lights—the greater light to govern the day and the lesser light to govern the night. He also made the stars. Rob set them in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth, to govern the day and the night, and to separate light from darkness. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the fourth day.

And Rob said, "Let the water teem with living creatures, and let birds fly above the earth across the expanse of the sky." So Rob set the server poperties to "MobsEnabled = true" and thus created the great creatures of the sea and every living and moving thing with which the water teems, according to their kinds, and every winged bird according to its kind. And Rob saw that it was good. Rob blessed them and said, "Be fruitful and increase in number and fill the water in the seas, and let the birds increase on the earth." And there was evening, and there was morning—the fifth day.

And Rob said, "Let the land produce living creatures according to their kinds: livestock, creatures that move along the ground, and wild animals, each according to its kind." And it was so. Rob made the wild animals according to their kinds, the livestock according to their kinds, and all the creatures that move along the ground according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let us make man in our image, in our likeness, and let them rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over all the creatures that move along the ground."

So Rob created man in his own image,
in the image of Server Admin he created him;
Zaneo and Jacksowhat he created them.

Rob blessed them and said to them, "Be fruitful and increase the playerbase; fill the earth and subdue it. Rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air and over every living creature that moves on the ground."

Then Rob said, "I give you every seed-bearing plant on the face of the whole earth and every tree that has fruit with seed in it. They will be yours for food. And to all the beasts of the earth and all the birds of the air and all the creatures that move on the ground—everything that has the breath of life in it—I give every green plant for food." And it was so.

Rob saw all that he had made, and it was very good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the sixth day.

And on the seventh day Rob ended his work which He had made; and his girlfriend made him rest on the seventh day from all his work which He had made. And Rob blessed the seventh day, and sanctified it; because that in it he had rested from all his work which Rob created and made.

[Tiel424]

In the beginning, Rob created the server. At first the earth was shapeless and covered in darkness, and Rob's spirit hovered over the waters. Rob said,"/time Day". And there was light. Rob divided the day from the night, naming them ' day' and 'night'. And there was evening, and there was morning—the first day.

And Rob said, "Let there be an expanse between the waters to separate water from water." So Rob made the expanse and separated the water under the expanse from the water above it. And it was so. Rob called the expanse "sky." And there was evening, and there was morning—the second day.

And Rob said, "Let the water under the sky be gathered to one place, and let dry ground appear." And it was so. Rob called the dry ground "land," and the gathered waters he called "seas." And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let the land produce vegetation: seed-bearing plants and trees on the land that bear fruit with seed in it, according to their various kinds." And it was so. The land produced vegetation: plants bearing seed according to their kinds and trees bearing fruit with seed in it according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the third day.

And Rob said, "Let there be lights in the expanse of the sky to separate the day from the night, and let them serve as signs to mark seasons and days and years, and let them be lights in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth." And it was so. Rob made two great lights—the greater light to govern the day and the lesser light to govern the night. He also made the stars. Rob set them in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth, to govern the day and the night, and to separate light from darkness. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the fourth day.

And Rob said, "Let the water teem with living creatures, and let birds fly above the earth across the expanse of the sky." So Rob set the server poperties to "MobsEnabled = true" and thus created the great creatures of the sea and every living and moving thing with which the water teems, according to their kinds, and every winged bird according to its kind. And Rob saw that it was good. Rob blessed them and said, "Be fruitful and increase in number and fill the water in the seas, and let the birds increase on the earth." And there was evening, and there was morning—the fifth day.

And Rob said, "Let the land produce living creatures according to their kinds: livestock, creatures that move along the ground, and wild animals, each according to its kind." And it was so. Rob made the wild animals according to their kinds, the livestock according to their kinds, and all the creatures that move along the ground according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let us make man in our image, in our likeness, and let them rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over all the creatures that move along the ground."

So Rob created man in his own image,
in the image of Server Admin he created him;
Zaneo and Jacksowhat he created them.

Rob blessed them and said to them, "Be fruitful and increase the playerbase; fill the earth and subdue it. Rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air and over every living creature that moves on the ground."

Then Rob said, "I give you every seed-bearing plant on the face of the whole earth and every tree that has fruit with seed in it. They will be yours for food. And to all the beasts of the earth and all the birds of the air and all the creatures that move on the ground—everything that has the breath of life in it—I give every green plant for food." And it was so.

Rob saw all that he had made, and it was very good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the sixth day.

And on the seventh day Rob ended his work which He had made; and his girlfriend made him rest on the seventh day from all his work which He had made. And Rob blessed the seventh day, and sanctified it; because that in it he had rested from all his work which Rob created and made.

Ok Zaneo that made me lmao.

[Dr_Obvious]

In the beginning, Rob created the server. At first the earth was shapeless and covered in darkness, and Rob's spirit hovered over the waters. Rob said,"/time Day". And there was light. Rob divided the day from the night, naming them ' day' and 'night'. And there was evening, and there was morning—the first day.

And Rob said, "Let there be an expanse between the waters to separate water from water." So Rob made the expanse and separated the water under the expanse from the water above it. And it was so. Rob called the expanse "sky." And there was evening, and there was morning—the second day.

And Rob said, "Let the water under the sky be gathered to one place, and let dry ground appear." And it was so. Rob called the dry ground "land," and the gathered waters he called "seas." And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let the land produce vegetation: seed-bearing plants and trees on the land that bear fruit with seed in it, according to their various kinds." And it was so. The land produced vegetation: plants bearing seed according to their kinds and trees bearing fruit with seed in it according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the third day.

And Rob said, "Let there be lights in the expanse of the sky to separate the day from the night, and let them serve as signs to mark seasons and days and years, and let them be lights in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth." And it was so. Rob made two great lights—the greater light to govern the day and the lesser light to govern the night. He also made the stars. Rob set them in the expanse of the sky to give light on the earth, to govern the day and the night, and to separate light from darkness. And Rob saw that it was good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the fourth day.

And Rob said, "Let the water teem with living creatures, and let birds fly above the earth across the expanse of the sky." So Rob set the server poperties to "MobsEnabled = true" and thus created the great creatures of the sea and every living and moving thing with which the water teems, according to their kinds, and every winged bird according to its kind. And Rob saw that it was good. Rob blessed them and said, "Be fruitful and increase in number and fill the water in the seas, and let the birds increase on the earth." And there was evening, and there was morning—the fifth day.

And Rob said, "Let the land produce living creatures according to their kinds: livestock, creatures that move along the ground, and wild animals, each according to its kind." And it was so. Rob made the wild animals according to their kinds, the livestock according to their kinds, and all the creatures that move along the ground according to their kinds. And Rob saw that it was good.

Then Rob said, "Let us make man in our image, in our likeness, and let them rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over all the creatures that move along the ground."

So Rob created man in his own image,
in the image of Server Admin he created him;
Zaneo and Jacksowhat he created them.

Rob blessed them and said to them, "Be fruitful and increase the playerbase; fill the earth and subdue it. Rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air and over every living creature that moves on the ground."

Then Rob said, "I give you every seed-bearing plant on the face of the whole earth and every tree that has fruit with seed in it. They will be yours for food. And to all the beasts of the earth and all the birds of the air and all the creatures that move on the ground—everything that has the breath of life in it—I give every green plant for food." And it was so.

Rob saw all that he had made, and it was very good. And there was evening, and there was morning—the sixth day.

And on the seventh day Rob ended his work which He had made; and his girlfriend made him rest on the seventh day from all his work which He had made. And Rob blessed the seventh day, and sanctified it; because that in it he had rested from all his work which Rob created and made.

Im not religious, but I like your story on how the land we see on the google map that rob brings us became to be what is seen today, the sky, the people, the...well im done with my store but good story